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oneforthemoney
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My Tribute

Post by oneforthemoney » Tue Jan 21, 2003 10:50 am

Just mixed feelings ....



-My tribute-



These nights that I cry,

I cry to disappear.

Even in the breaking of my mind,

the pain aching in my chest,

the tears moisten my soul to

a bittersweet tenderness.



I'm a failure



We strive for perfection

To be someone we're not.

We live random lives,

plastered fake grins on our faces.



It's amazing how much I do for you,

Yet, even when it satifies both of us,

It tears me apart to know

that I don't belong to you.



I'm insane - your love drives me to the

edge of definite insanity.



Get out - I can't



They warned me,

I was was warned not to cross

that thin line between love and hate,

I stepped so far into love,

that I can't even hate you anymore.

I can't even hate you

for making me love you so much.



I hate myself for for being so loving.



I seek these days

that I was once a cold hearted freak



I'm so broken,

I have everything I need,

Yet, without you everything becomes obsolete.



Not another love poem

about another lover.

A manifesto or declaration of

leaving this burden of my obsession

...at your door



No worries she said " I won't be ringing you doorbell any time soon"



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Well - what can I say - I won't be back for a while.

It's too complicated.



- Tally -



Love you all!

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Re: My Tribute

Post by xxwhereisfredxx » Tue Jan 21, 2003 11:52 am

i really like your poem...kinda depressing! lol........but it still kicks the shit outta anything i write! WHAT?!?!?! you're not coming back for a while........?!?!
When I hear somebody sigh that Life is hard, I am always tempted to ask, Compared to what?

If we did the things we are capable of, we would astound ourselves.

Ability is what you're capable of doing. Motivation determines what you do. Attitude determines how well you do it.


You see things; and you say Why? But I dream things that never were; and I say Why not?

It is a hard matter, my fellow citizens, to argue with the belly, since it has no ears.

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