Tell Me

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Tell Me

Post by BloodyRosesGC » Mon Apr 28, 2003 8:12 pm

tell me if u like this i wrote...

Tell me when does this hurting stop?

When can I finally rise to the top?

Above all this chaos regarding my heart,

That?s ever so slowly torn me apart.

Time has erased all signs of delight,

Unbridled tears adjoin me at night.

One altercation and then we were done

An arduous task that now has begun.

The outcome for us is already fated,

No matter the ending I know that I?ll hate it.

I?m tired of feeling erroneous and dumb,

So for now I?ll just have to somehow succumb

To the real world where thy shall not dwell on the past.

For thou hast move on to that which will last.

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Re: Tell Me

Post by tornbutterfly » Mon Apr 28, 2003 9:21 pm

I like it! :D
The whole idea of fitting in is crazy to me.

Why would you want to be just like everyone else?

The same old stuff. How great not to be.

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