Emotionally Numb

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Pisces_Queen_225
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Emotionally Numb

Post by Pisces_Queen_225 » Mon Dec 27, 2010 6:01 pm

Im emotionally numb

i no longer feel

my life is pointless

it isnt real



no matter how much i try

i never believed

that my emotionless heart

will ever be freed



my emotionless heart

has spun around

untill today

it knocked me down



it left me alone

with a thousand pieces

to put myself together

with no meaning no thesus

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Re: Emotionally Numb

Post by navynate » Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:21 am

I liked the last line in the sense of the poetic feel. Its a touching piece, truly touching. Matters of the heart usually are, love to hear more especially those of other matters.
NavyNate [center]"The soft overcomes the hard,

The yielding overcomes the strong;

Every person knows this,

But no one can practice it."
-Tao Te Ching[/center]

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Re: Emotionally Numb

Post by invisibleartist » Fri Sep 28, 2012 6:21 pm

i can really feel the expression in this its good <img src='http://www.helpingteens.org/groups/publ ... >/punk.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Punk:' />
*Sometimes you need to run away just to see who will follow you*

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