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lies in love

Post by forsaken_without_you » Mon Dec 30, 2002 8:31 pm

this is about my exgirfriend...she hurt me so...





To never see you again

Is like my heart torn in two

To never feel your touch is like

Loosing all my senses.

As I look to the sky, I see your eyes.

Remembering the first touch you gave me.

I remember who you where



My heart goes numb; I hear your voice.

Am I something you gave away?

Can I be forgiven for something I never did wrong?





Without releasing, your hand left mine!

You slipped away from me...and there is nothing I can

Do, but say goodbye...

My love...I cant say it. I can?t say goodbye.



Your blood spills, my heart breaks...see what you did to me?

Yet you don't care. You left me behind. You never loved me, did you?

You never loved me; you fed me with lies, which have killed me inside....
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Re: lies in love

Post by Britt » Mon Dec 30, 2002 8:36 pm

wow, thats killer sad and all...wish i could hold you!!


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Re: lies in love

Post by forsaken_without_you » Mon Dec 30, 2002 8:42 pm

:'(
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Re: lies in love

Post by S.G.T » Sat Jan 11, 2003 6:31 am

Well, I see
If you like someone, you should tell him/her.

Coze you will never know what will happen to you or the other person tommorow...

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