I am driven to my outmost insanity
Punishment for my innocence
Sweetness is smashing my knuckles
Pain puts me to sleep
I try to escape
My efforts are tiring
Another day in the cage
My dreams seem to shatter to pieces
Pieces of broken hope
I cannot afford to stay calm
The cage will destroy me either way
How I?ve dreamt to be free
No expectations, no emotion
My veins of anger
Supplying the oxygen to my weak mind
I am the beast
You are the cage
The Cage
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yeah thats really good! but i'm one of those stupid ppl who dont "get" poems.....so what is that symbolism for?!?!
When I hear somebody sigh that Life is hard, I am always tempted to ask, Compared to what?
If we did the things we are capable of, we would astound ourselves.
Ability is what you're capable of doing. Motivation determines what you do. Attitude determines how well you do it.
You see things; and you say Why? But I dream things that never were; and I say Why not?
It is a hard matter, my fellow citizens, to argue with the belly, since it has no ears.
If we did the things we are capable of, we would astound ourselves.
Ability is what you're capable of doing. Motivation determines what you do. Attitude determines how well you do it.
You see things; and you say Why? But I dream things that never were; and I say Why not?
It is a hard matter, my fellow citizens, to argue with the belly, since it has no ears.
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Well....
It's all about my dad....
It's the way he makes me feel - he blames me for things I don't do or aren't responsible for. He doesn't welcome my opinion whatsoever...and it's about how angry he makes me....It's like he keeps me locked up in a cage.....only he's the cage.....and I'm like trying get away from him
It's all about my dad....
It's the way he makes me feel - he blames me for things I don't do or aren't responsible for. He doesn't welcome my opinion whatsoever...and it's about how angry he makes me....It's like he keeps me locked up in a cage.....only he's the cage.....and I'm like trying get away from him
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Originally posted by Laura1@Dec 24 2002, 01:23 AM
great symbolism
ditto
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Great job, keep it up.
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