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here you speak

Post by forsaken_without_you » Mon Dec 23, 2002 4:04 pm

You?re here for me, and I cant dream of a day without you.

I feel as though my heart was patched up. I feel you with me.









*this witches spell lingers in the air.

The candles light your eyes,

I kiss the sweet lips you hold hostage*





As she speaks to me, I draw back,

I cant hear anything but your words.

No one can tell me how I feel.

She continues to talk? all I can see is your face.

I push her away, and once again draw back.

I sit in cry alone in the dark.

I want to hold you, but your so far away.

I feel life slipping from my fingers.



I cry in pain, you hold me through my worst times

And my smile is not worthless to you.

My life has a meaning. No need for this urge.

My love for you grows every day, you?ll soon to see.
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Post by forsaken_without_you » Tue Dec 24, 2002 12:38 am

she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Post by forsaken_without_you » Wed Dec 25, 2002 1:08 pm

ANY ONE ELSE WANNA REPLY TO THIS??
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

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Re: here you speak

Post by Britt » Sun Dec 29, 2002 12:12 am

that was really awesome, your killer good writer


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Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Dec 29, 2002 12:59 am

thanks! :D
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Dec 29, 2002 10:51 pm

i am glad people like my work, thank you all.
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Post by daloverlyme » Sun Dec 29, 2002 11:05 pm

thats absolutly good.




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